Black Ghost

It's something that would definately catch my eye in a bookstore. Shades of Despair

FireArris, I think she made it pretty clear who her master is....(ahem, *GOD* :wink: ) But yeah, you did an awesome job of telling us who his master is without ...

Cool warrior guy....Nice!

This was pretty cool, Snoink :D . I really liked the two characters Christian and Pearl, you made them very distinct from each other which made the dialogue and stuff ...

8/10 good quality to have :)

Thanks for the critiques! I thought I'd return the favor. :P ____ Once upon an ancient past a seed was buried and from that very seed sprouted a sapling. The ...

Hi there! Not a bad piece, not a good piece. It isn't so much that your writing is bad, it's just that this is so very short, that it's hard ...

_____ Stickiness. Her arms and legs are covered with it. She touches her face; the dark liquid runs down her cheeks. She stares at her hands. They are dripping with ...

that girl gets an 8/10

I mostly type my stuff, but occasionaly I handwrite it first, which I've found is actually a better way to go. If I'm typing something into the computer that I've ...

6/10 looks like a lot of work...eek.

This is weird, but fun! I wish I had thought of it.... :P

I've had quite a few novel ideas since I began writing, some good, some painfully bad, but out of the mess I've managed to pursue a few choice projects that ...

8/10

Crazy hypothetical lammas have taken over the custodial service.